My first little presentation

First mail:

Hi Sonia!

How are you?

My name is Miquel Duñach and I’m 17 years old.  live in Castelló d’Empúries, and I’ study in the high school of village. I went to high school when I was 13 years old and did first to fourth ESO. But now I do first of batxillerat and the difficult level is more difficult than education secondary obligation. Before I saw you to the center, and you have been the English teacher of my brother that he is Màrius Duñach. As I said before, I started first of batxillerat but the last year, I didn’t work sufficient to pass second of batxillerat and I have repeat. This summer I’ worked hard of my business’s father and I saw it isn’t earn a live in our society currently in the moments who we are. This year I will work more than last year and I’m disposed more enthusiasm in studies for pass to university and have a better future.

Bye! 

Correction: 

Hi Sonia!

How are you?

My name is Miquel Duñach and I'm 17 years old. I live in Castelló d'Empúries, and I study in the high school of village. I went to high school when I was 13 years old and did first to fourth ESO.


But now I do first batxillerat and the difficult level is more difficult than education secondary obligation. Before I saw you to the center,and you have been the English teacher of my brother that he is Màrius Duñach. As I said before, I started first of batxillerat but the last year, I didn't work sufficient to pass second of batxillerat and I have repeat.


This summer I worked hard of my business's father and I saw it isn't earn a live at Hesse times who we are. This year I will work more than last year and I'm willing more enthusiasm in studies to pass to university and have a better future.

Bye!

Miquel Duñach